Is this a good poem…………?

What is it that you like and what is it that you hate?

What is the heart you fake and what keeps you straight.

So much patience so far, man what’s causing you to wait.

Temptations in debate

Every time you see her face.

Temptations in the heart done let that boy go astray.

Just saw a girl with some big ones are they real or are they fake

Opps keep a pure mind dog…come on Khalid lower your gaze.

But I say I was doing a vision check to make sure I wasn’t gay.

Kicked it in the crib got the remote a pushed play.

Islamic dvd in the player, what they had to say?

man talking bout Jenna..boy, betta keep yo mind straight.

Don’t stare at pretty girls, keep them hormones in delay.

Cause if Jenna was to meet you, you’ll regret it on that day.

When it stares you in your face.

That’ll be a regretful day.

idk..just decided to write a little today

"But I say I was doing a vision check to make sure I wasn’t gay."

I LOL’d.

10 Responses to “Is this a good poem…………?”

  1. yea
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  2. Nope, it blows
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  3. cousinbonehead on April 24th, 2010 at 12:40 pm

    Its ok
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    Get it?

  4. Self proclaimed top contributor on April 24th, 2010 at 1:05 pm

    it’s great
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  5. "But I say I was doing a vision check to make sure I wasn’t gay."

    I LOL’d.
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  6. yesyesyesyesyes on April 24th, 2010 at 1:57 pm

    niiiice.

    add a dope beat, and you got yourself a rap.

    hollllla.
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  7. TJ The Texan Gal on April 24th, 2010 at 2:05 pm

    That’s beautiful man. I love it soo much!
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  8. It’s alright
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  9. ALL SkReWeD UP on April 24th, 2010 at 3:00 pm

    I like it!
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  10. really good keep up the good work i love poems this really neet
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