What do you think of my rap?
What is it that you like and what is it that you hate?
What is the heart you fake and what keeps you straight.
So much patience so far, man what’s causing you to wait.
Temptations in debate
Every time you see her face.
Temptations in the heart done let that boy go astray.
Just saw a girl with some big ones are they real or are they fake
Opps keep a pure mind dog…come on Khalid lower your gaze.
But I say I was doing a vision check to make sure I wasn’t gay.
Kicked it in the crib got the remote a pushed play.
Islamic dvd in the player, what they had to say?
man talking bout Jenna..boy, betta keep yo mind straight.
Don’t stare at pretty girls, keep them hormones in delay.
Cause if Jenna was to meet you, you’ll regret it on that day.
When it stares you in your face.
That’ll be a regretful day.
idk..just decided to write a little today
The flow is alright, but the lyrics could be tighter…and less simple.
I like what it’s about, sort of. If you had a different way of going about telling it. It’s super clean, which is always dope.
Just work a little more, and you should have yourself a nice piece. But right now, I’d give it a 6/10.
The flow is alright, but the lyrics could be tighter…and less simple.
I like what it’s about, sort of. If you had a different way of going about telling it. It’s super clean, which is always dope.
Just work a little more, and you should have yourself a nice piece. But right now, I’d give it a 6/10.
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i like the concept, but it’s sloppy and hard to follow. Just read it over a couple of times, and you’ll see a couple of places that need fixing.
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aye it’s better than gucci mane or lil s’hithead wayne or souilja boy
hip hop is about substance which you got in that verse
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