Comments on: What would you rate my writing on a scale of 1-10?

By: I Am Rich!!!!!

I Am Rich!!!!! — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 15:30:59 +0000

Oh, wow. Oh, wow, oh, wow, oh wow, oh, wow. I am blown away by your writing. Your writing has this tug to it, the beginning hooked me, and the emotional roller coaster kept me reading until the end. If anybody could capture the uncertainties of life and faith, you are the one. As another Answerer said, please email me when/if you are going to write a book with this writing, so I can be one of the first to buy it. I would give this beautiful and interesting writing a 10/10.
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Myself.

By: ~sweet & low rainbow girl~♥

~sweet & low rainbow girl~♥ — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 14:45:59 +0000

6/10
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By: :)

:) — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 14:25:59 +0000

oh my gosh thats amazing…can you send me an email when it goes into stores? i need to know what happends? i kinda want her to struglle alot and then i want him to be like God will help you and then for her to love church and i want them to dall in love….obviouslly

for some reason i have a mental picture of the characters

ooo maybe her parents should kick her out and she should move in with like the pastor and his wife (depending on the domination of church ) lol or she could move into anywhere really but i think that would make the story more realistic
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By: Thomas

Thomas — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 13:54:59 +0000

I like the sentiment, and I like how it flowed from a questioning of faith to a concrete example of moral dilemma. However it's immature almost childish to me. That is not to say it was not beautifully written. Write more, enjoyable. Inspiration and work = greatness
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By: ♥Emmy Love♥

♥Emmy Love♥ — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 13:36:59 +0000

i like the idea. but i think the way you introduced the girl being raped was a bit random. maybe it should be a more emotional scene, because i kind of feel like this story will be about her and her teenage pregnancy rather than religion.

if it is about religion, i still think it’s in an awkward spot.
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my opinion btw, what you said about my story… it was exactly right

By: Hah.

Hah. — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 12:46:59 +0000

The part where it mentions "rape" really caught my attention. I’m hooked. Where can I read the rest??
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Oh yeah, and are they 16 or 17? You mention both ages…

By: [♦KαiИ♦]™

[♦KαiИ♦]™ — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 12:19:59 +0000

Sorry,I dono’t understand it much…
Although I kinda went throught the agnostic phase,but I’m Catholic now and the only thing that can make me stop believing in God is if he told me that He didnt exist.
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By: Blah-Blah

Blah-Blah — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 11:36:59 +0000

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By: ♪ Juicy Juice ♪

♪ Juicy Juice ♪ — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 11:21:59 +0000

its loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong but yea i rate it 10/10 i like ur vocabulary
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